Chiaki
She presented clearly about her idea about success with a clear voice. She tried to make eye contacts while she was talking. The length of her presentation was good, so we were concentrated on that. I have the same idea about success.
Kyoka
Her content was good and easy to understand. Her voice was not clear and she read her note almost whole time, so I want her to improve these points next time. However we were interested in her presentation.
Manami
Her opinion was experimental and very convincing, so her presentation holded our attention. Though her voice was clear, I want her to make more eye contacts.
Takaaki
His attitude for this presentation was better than before. His opinions were clear and original. In the middle of his speach his voice was became indistinct, so if he improved that, his presentation would be better.
Mizuho
He spoke loudly, so it was easy to listen. His contents was also convincing and unique. He looked shy, so he should do presentation more confidently to improve his presentation next time.
autocriticism
I practiced this presentation, and tried to not have a look at my note. I spoke loudly, but it was not clear. And my content was not easy to understand, so I should improve these points.
