Comments on members' presentations
Mizuho
He presentationed at first in our group, so he looked strain. But the content of his presentation was good and I could sympathy. His voice was big enough and the presentation went smoothly with eye contacts because of his preparation. If he mentioned what he efforts more concretely, it was better.
Takaaki
His voice and content were good, and he made eye contacts again and again. His preparation was inadequate so the flow was not so good. But I was interested in his content. I want him to presentation with a dignified attitude next time.
Mariko
Her content resembled Mizuho's one, but it was interesting too. Although she didn't prepare for this presentation, it flowed on. Her attitude was good and her voice was silver. To improve her presentation, she might want to make more eye contacts next time.
Asuka
Her content was different from ather's and it was the most inresting for me. Her voice was low, but it went fine. It means her preparation for this presentation was good. However, she avoided eye contacts with us, so if she made change at this point, her presentation is expected to be better.
Self-criticism
I didn't prepare enough for this preparation, so the flow was not so good. But I made eye contacts with this members and my voice was not so bad. Members of the presentation were interested in my content, so I should prepare and talk clearly next time.
